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PostPosted: Sat Sep 01, 2012 2:15 am 
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Um, the message panel said I couldn't reply to your message and I thought I sent you one on TPC but I don't know if that got through, so I was wondering;

Is Cynthia still open to write (and in the game)?


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 Post subject: Re: Cynthia
PostPosted: Mon Sep 03, 2012 5:29 am 
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Is Cynthia still open to write (and in the game)?

Totally. And honestly, because of the brief impression I got of her (through Bulbapedia or something) I really wanted her to be one of the first characters :D

I moved this thread so you can post/edit her dialog here directly.

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 Post subject: Re: Cynthia
PostPosted: Sun Dec 23, 2012 1:05 am 
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I feel like I've made you wait forever, I'm so sorry! But here's what I have for Cynthia so far. I used the format of your example character.

Also, I was wondering if you needed any help drawing anything. I just got a new tablet so I'm able to do more art.

Code:
   
## Talking

    # Stranger
    Cynthia "Who might you be?"
    Cynthia "Did you need directions?"
    Cynthia "Are you new to the island?"
    Cynthia "My name is Cynthia, I'm a Pokemon Trainer."
    Cynthia "Have you come for the tournament?"

    # New Friend
    Cynthia "How are you?"
    Cynthia "Have you been to the beach yet?"
    Cynthia "Are you excited about the tournament?"
    Cynthia "Have you seen the mountain?"
    Cynthia "Are your Pokemon ready for the tournament?"

    # Good Friend
    Cynthia "I'd like to explore that mountain sometime..."
    Cynthia "It's nice to be out on a day like this."
    Cynthia "What kinds of Pokemon are your favorites I wonder?"
    Cynthia "There's no snow here like in Sinnoh, it's almost disappointing."
    Cynthia "I wonder if we'll ever face off in the tournament."

    # Close Friend
    Cynthia "It's great to see you!"
    Cynthia "Today seems like a great day for a visit to the beach."
    Cynthia "Have you been to the Sinnoh region before?"
    Cynthia "I feel like I can trust you more than most people."
    Cynthia "Are you ready for the tournament?"

    # Boyfriend
    Cynthia "It's so great to see you!"
    Cynthia "I'm so happy to be with you."
    Cynthia "We make such a great couple!"
    Cynthia "We should go to the beach together sometime."
    Cynthia "I wonder if we'll have to battle in the tournament."

    # Lover
    Cynthia "How are you feeling today?"
    Cynthia "I love you so much..."
    Cynthia "I feel so lucky to be with you."
    Cynthia "Being around you is such a wonderful feeling"
    Cynthia "Challenging you in the tournament will be...interesting."

    #Boy Toy
    Cynthia "It's nice to see you."
    Cynthia "What have you brought today?"
    Cynthia "How are you?"
    Cynthia "Maybe you could take me to the beach sometime..."
    Cynthia "Are you still in the tournament?"
    # Best Friend FOREVER
    Cynthia "It's so great to see you!"
    Cynthia "We should take a hike on that mountain sometime."
    Cynthia "How are you?"
    Cynthia "I'm so thankful to have such a great friend."
    Cynthia "You've been such a great friend."

    ## Battles

    # accepting the challenge
    Cynthia "A batte? I would like that." #small smile

    # she wins
    Cynthia "Battle again sometime?" #neutral

    # tie
    Cynthia "That was a heated match..." #neutral

    # she looses
    Cynthia "The bond between you and your Pokemon..." #slight surprise
    Cynthia "...it's awe-inspiring." #thoughtful smile

    ## Gifts
    ## note it starts with "I have a little present for you."

    # not accepting gifts
    Cynthia "A gift? No thank you." #neutral

    # accepting gifts
    Cynthia "A gift, for me?" #slight surprise

    # derp
    Cynthia "That was...a kinda gesture..." #uninterested

    # small
    Cynthia "That's sweet of you" #neutral

    # normal
    Cynthia "This is very nice, thank you." #smile

    # large
    Cynthia "This is great great, thank you!" #big smile

    # superb
    Cynthia "This is..." #shocked
    Cynthia "This is amazing, thank you so much! I love this!" #blushing

    ## Dating

    # not accepting date
    Cynthia "I'm sorry, but a date? That's too sudden." #uneasy

    # accepting date
    ## it should include the player's about to choose a location
    Cynthia "Well... where should we visit?" # blushing

    # taking a photo
    Cynthia "We'll be able to treasure these moments forever."

    # enough talk
    Cynthia "Isn't that enough chatter for now?"

    # enough questions
    Cynthia "I'm beginning to wonder if you're suspicious of me or something..."

    # enough gifts
    Cynthia "Please, you've given me quite enough already!"

    # enough photos
    Cynthia "It feels like we're overdoing it with these pictures."


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 Post subject: Re: Cynthia
PostPosted: Tue Jan 08, 2013 10:15 am 
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This is great, really! :D
And I'm not mad for the waiting, I'm far more pleased by the results! (This obviously has to do something with the fact I wasn't fast enough to complete everything else in the game before you posted this :P)

It's just that my template isn't that up to date anymore, so there are still lines missing (against due to my not-lazy-but-also-not-fast-enough work).

But first some comments on what you've written. I'm so pleased because one can easy see that these lines fit well together, so even if I can't judge the ICness (have to trust you here), it is certainly someone with a certain character. I have to admit I was surprised a little bit too, I expected Cynthia to be a little more pushing (like Erza from Fairy Tail). But well, I'm satisfied and copied most of the lines into the script with only some minor changes. (The biggest one would be that I pointed out "ONLY beach".) Some lines where not copied, following:

> "Are you new to the island?"
That goes for pretty much everyone on the island.
> "My name is Cynthia, I'm a Pokemon Trainer."
Girls are supposed to say that when they become a New Friend to the Protagonist.
> "Have you seen the mountain?"
Since she is met there, that's a little bit unneccessary.
> "I'd like to explore that mountain sometime..."
As said, she is to be found there, so I was unsure of how to change this sentence.
> "I wonder if we'll ever face off in the tournament."
As Brock isn't in the tournament, this is a little bit off, since she should now it already.
> "Are you ready for the tournament?"
Thing is, these lines may go for other Protagonists like Red (to be inserted in the game much later).
> "I wonder if we'll have to battle in the tournament."
Slowly my comments are running out.
> "Challenging you in the tournament will be...interesting."
One could challenge the Protagonist everytime, since no trainer can escape a Pokemon fight!!1! :)
> "I'm beginning to wonder if you're suspicious of me or something..."
I'm not sure if you know that that comes after the Protagonist was asked by the girl (even when the player chose the action). I did copy that one through.

And now what we still need at the moment:
- First off, questions with possible answers, which have to be rated from 0 to 3 (as very wrong, wrong, almost right, right). As speaking lines, they will be associated with a milestone. For now only for Close Friend, I have to think about the concept a little bit more. Has to do with when questions are allowed and how much can be asked about the character. By the way, in your lines Cynthia isn't telling much of herself beside her name, that she is fighting in the tournament and comes from Sinnoh. Maybe there can be added more information, starting from Good Friend? Also her sizes would be of interest: length, mass, bust/waist/hip size, but only going into Boyfriend/Lover, of course.
- reactions when the protagonist gave a very wrong/wrong/almost right/right answer (like "What?! You stupid idiot!!", "No, that is wrong.", "Ehm, almost right I guess...", "That's right!")
- what she says when she don't want to ask the protagonist a question about herself now (like "I don't feel like questioning now.")
- what she says instead of her speaking lines when she is ready for the next milestone (from to-New-Friend to to-Lover, like "You don't seem to be a bad guy...", "Wouldn't you like to call me sometimes?", "I think I know you better know...", "Won't you take me out on a date?", "I... I think...")
- what she says when the next milestone IS accomplished (from to-New-Friend to to-BFF, like "My name is MistyCynthia, nice to meet you.", "My Nav-ID is 434-254-7368, please remember it", "My Birthday is the 10th of October.", "Do... do you want to be my boyfriend?", "I think... I think I {i}love{/i} you! ♥", "When I think of it, there would be something else I need...", "I'm so glad you're {i}always{/i} listening for me.") Note to-Good-Friend she should give out her cell phone number/nav ID and to-Close-Friend tell her Birthday.
- what she says when the Prota wants to do something with her but can't due to low HP, like "You seem exhausted, rest please."
- what she says when the Prota wanted to give a gift but decided otherwise, "Oh, so you joke about giving gifts?"
- when she has to decline a battle due to defeated pokemon, like "My Pokémon are defeated, sorry."
- when the protagonist is trying to kiss but they haven't yet and she doesn't want to, like "Ewww, what are you doing?!"
- same as before, but after they already kissed, like "Save it for later, sweetie."
- when prota wants to make a photo but she doesn't want yet like "Please don't take a picture of me..."

Oh, and Alpha release is on the 23.01.2013, so we should be ready three days prior

Thank you for your offer with the images, I'll come back on that

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 Post subject: Re: Cynthia
PostPosted: Wed Jul 24, 2013 5:18 am 
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So here are the new formatted lines for Cynthia. Please add emotions like I demonstrated with Misty.

I wrote the things marked with #*** by myself because we needed it for the release. Feel free to overwork these, too.

Code:
###
# Data of Cynthia, mostly their lines.
# Created on 16.03.2013 by Sebastian Koch
###

init -4 python:
   
    iC = iCharCynthia
           
   
    ##########
    ## casual talking
    ##########
   
   
    linesTalking[iC][iMsStranger] += [
        "Who might you be?"]
    linesTalking[iC][iMsStranger] += [
        "Do you need directions?"]
    linesTalking[iC][iMsStranger] += [
        "Have you come for the tournament?"]
       
    linesTalking[iC][iMsNewFriend] += [
        "How are you?"]
    linesTalking[iC][iMsNewFriend] += [
        "Have you been to the ONLY beach yet?"]
    linesTalking[iC][iMsNewFriend] += [
        "Are you excited about the tournament?"]
    linesTalking[iC][iMsNewFriend] += [
        "Are your Pokémon ready for the tournament?"]
       
    linesTalking[iC][iMsGoodFriend] += [
        "It's nice to be out on a day like this."]
    linesTalking[iC][iMsGoodFriend] += [
        "What kinds of Pokemon are your favorites I wonder?"]
    linesTalking[iC][iMsGoodFriend] += [
        "There's no snow here like in Sinnoh, it's almost disappointing."]
       
    linesTalking[iC][iMsCloseFriend] += [
        "It's great to see you!"]
    linesTalking[iC][iMsCloseFriend] += [
        "Today seems like a great day for a visit to the beach."]
    linesTalking[iC][iMsCloseFriend] += [
        "Have you been to the Sinnoh region before?"]
    linesTalking[iC][iMsCloseFriend] += [
        "I feel like I can trust you more than most people."]
       
    linesTalking[iC][iMsBoyfriend] += [
        "It's so great to see you!"]
    linesTalking[iC][iMsBoyfriend] += [
        "I'm so happy to be with you."]
    linesTalking[iC][iMsBoyfriend] += [
        "We make such a great couple!"]
    linesTalking[iC][iMsBoyfriend] += [
        "We should go to the beach together sometime."]
       
    linesTalking[iC][iMsLover] += [
        "How are you feeling today?"]
    linesTalking[iC][iMsLover] += [
        "I love you so much..."]
    linesTalking[iC][iMsLover] += [
        "I feel so lucky to be with you."]
    linesTalking[iC][iMsLover] += [
        "Being around you is such a wonderful feeling."]
       
    linesTalking[iC][iMsBoytoy] += [
        "It's nice to see you."]
    linesTalking[iC][iMsBoytoy] += [
        "What have you brought today?"]
    linesTalking[iC][iMsBoytoy] += [
        "How are you?"]
    linesTalking[iC][iMsBoytoy] += [
        "Maybe you could take me to the beach sometime..."]
    linesTalking[iC][iMsBoytoy] += [
        "Are you still in the tournament?"]
       
    linesTalking[iC][iMsBFF] += [
        "It's so great to see you!"]
    linesTalking[iC][iMsBFF] += [
        "We should take a hike on this mountain sometime."]
    linesTalking[iC][iMsBFF] += [
        "How are you?"]
    linesTalking[iC][iMsBFF] += [
        "I'm so thankful to have such a great friend."]
    linesTalking[iC][iMsBFF] += [
        "You've been such a great friend."]
           
       
    ##########
    ## questions
    ##########
   
    ## well, we have none yet
           
       
    ##########
    ## other things
    ##########
       
       
    linesAnswerReaction[iC][iALVeryWrong] = "What?! You stupid idiot!!" #***
    linesAnswerReaction[iC][iALWrong] = "No, that is wrong." #***
    linesAnswerReaction[iC][iALAlmostRight] = "Ehm, almost right I guess..." #***
    linesAnswerReaction[iC][iALRight] = "That's right!" #***
   
    linesNoQuestions[iC] = "I don't feel like questioning now." #***
   
    linesNextMilestoneReady[iC][iMsStranger] = [
        "I wish I could just forget you!"] #***
    linesNextMilestoneReady[iC][iMsNewFriend] = [
        "You don't seem to be a bad guy..."] #***
    linesNextMilestoneReady[iC][iMsGoodFriend] = [
        "Wouldn't you like to call me sometimes?"] #***
    linesNextMilestoneReady[iC][iMsCloseFriend] = [
        "I think I know you better know..."] #***
    linesNextMilestoneReady[iC][iMsBoyfriend] = [
        "Won't you take me out on a date?"] #***
    linesNextMilestoneReady[iC][iMsLover] = [
        "I... I think..."] #***
    linesNextMilestoneReady[iC][iMsBoytoy] = [
        "Thank you again for the last gift."] #***
    linesNextMilestoneReady[iC][iMsBFF] = [
        "You are {i}soo{/i} nice!"] #***
       
    linesNextMilestoneAccomplished[iC][iMsStranger] = [
        "I don't know you anymore."] #***
    linesNextMilestoneAccomplished[iC][iMsNewFriend] = [
        "My name is Cynthia, nice to meet you."] #***
    linesNextMilestoneAccomplished[iC][iMsGoodFriend] = [
        "My Nav-ID is 402-168-6974, please remember it"] #***
    linesNextMilestoneAccomplished[iC][iMsCloseFriend] = [
        "My Birthday is the 10th of October."] #***
    linesNextMilestoneAccomplished[iC][iMsBoyfriend] = [
        "Do... do you want to be my boyfriend?"] #***
    linesNextMilestoneAccomplished[iC][iMsLover] = [
        "I think... I think I {i}love{/i} you! ♥"] #***
    linesNextMilestoneAccomplished[iC][iMsBoytoy] = [
        "When I think of it, there would be something else I need..."] #***
    linesNextMilestoneAccomplished[iC][iMsBFF] = [
        "I'm so glad you're {i}always{/i} listening for me."] #***
   
    linesNotEnoughHP[iC] = "You seem exhausted, rest please." #***
    linesNoGiftTaken[iC] = "A gift? No thank you."
    linesNoGiftGiven[iC] = "Well, that decision is up to you."
    linesAcceptGifts[iC] = "A gift, for me?"
   
    linesGifting[iC][iGiftDerp] = [
        "That was... a kinda gesture..."]
    linesGifting[iC][iGiftSmall] = [
        "That's sweet of you"]
    linesGifting[iC][iGiftMedium] = [
        "This is very nice, thank you."]
    linesGifting[iC][iGiftLarge] = [
        "This is great great, thank you!"]
    linesGifting[iC][iGiftSuperb] = [
        "This is... This is amazing, thank you so much! I love this!"]
       
    linesBattleAccepted[iC] = "A batte? I would like that."
    linesBattleDeclined[iC] = "My Pokémon are defeated, sorry." #***
    linesBattleWon[iC] = "Battle again sometime?"
    linesBattleLost[iC] = "The bond between you and your Pokemon... it's awe-inspiring."
    linesBattleTie[iC] = "That was a heated match..."
   
    linesNoKissYet[iC] = "No, you don't!"
    linesNoKissNow[iC] = "Save it for later, sweetie." #***
   
    linesDateDeclined[iC] = "I'm sorry, but a date? That's too sudden."
    linesDateAccepted[iC] = "Well... where should we visit?"
    linesDateEnoughTalk[iC] = "Isn't that enough chatter for now?"
    linesDateEnoughQuestions[iC] = "I'm beginning to wonder if you're suspicious of me or something..."
    linesDateEnoughGifts[iC] = "Please, you've given me quite enough already!"
    linesDateNoPhotoYet[iC] = "Please don't take a picture of me..."
    linesDatePhotoSuccess[iC] = "We'll be able to treasure these moments forever."
    linesDateEnoughPhotos[iC] = "It feels like we're overdoing it with these pictures."
    linesDateNoFirstKiss[iC] = linesNoKissYet[iC]
    linesDateNoKiss[iC] = linesNoKissNow[iC]
       
       
    ##########
    ## gifting values
    ## (all are initialized with iGiftDerp)
    ##########
       
   
    girlGiftEffect[iC][iItemPokeball] = iGiftSmall #***
    girlGiftEffect[iC][iItemFlowers] = iGiftSmall #***
    girlGiftEffect[iC][iItemPlushPikachu] = iGiftSmall #***
    girlGiftEffect[iC][iItemDiamondRing] = iGiftLarge #***
    girlGiftEffect[iC][iItemSuperPotion] = iGiftMedium #***
    girlGiftEffect[iC][iItemWaterstone] = iGiftMedium #***
    girlGiftEffect[iC][iItemThunderstone] = iGiftMedium #***
    girlGiftEffect[iC][iItemLeafstone] = iGiftMedium #***
    girlGiftEffect[iC][iItemFirestone] = iGiftMedium #***
    girlGiftEffect[iC][iItemMoonstone] = iGiftSmall #***
    girlGiftEffect[iC][iItemCompass] = iGiftMedium #***


And then there is her interaction at the opening ceremony, which is currently based on my thinking. Feel free to overwork it, though I tried to write her in character.

Code:
#####
## in count 2 Cynthia is reachable
#####

label ocCynthia:
    show cynthia at right
    "You manage to reach her."
    Cynthia "Oh hey. I guess you want to talk with me, too?"
    "She looks exhausted."
    menu:
        Cynthia "Oh hey. I guess you want to talk with me, too?"
       
        "\"Yes, I wanted to get to know you.\"":
            Cynthia "Well, here I am. As you probably know, I'm Cynthia. And you are..."
            Prota "Brock, gym leader of Pewter City in Kanto."
            Cynthia "Oh, Kanto..."
            Steven "You must be Cynthia!"
            Cynthia "And you Steven Steel, former champ of Hoenn."
            "Cynthia seems to find this guy much more interesting than you."
            $ SIA.getRel(iCharCynthia).raiseExp(100)
            $ SIA.getRel(iCharCynthia).levelUp()
            hide cynthia
            $ counter = counter + 1
            return
        "\"I would rather be your boyfriend!\"":
            show cynthia laugh
            Cynthia "Haha, a good joke! What's your name?"
            menu:
                Cynthia "Haha, a good joke! What's your name?"
               
                "\"I'm Brock.\"":
                    show cynthia smile
                    Cynthia "As you probably know, I'm Cynthia. Nice to meet you, Brock."
                    Steven "You must be Cynthia!"
                    Cynthia "A moment please."
                    Cynthia "Okay, Brock. Many people want to speak with me, so I'm a bit busy right now. See you later!"
                    $ SIA.getRel(iCharCynthia).raiseExp(200)
                    $ SIA.getRel(iCharCynthia).levelUp()
                    hide cynthia
                    return
                "\"I really mean it!\"":
                    show cynthia serious
                    Cynthia "Okay, cut it, will you? Oh, Steven Steel!"
                    "She turns away from you."
                    $ SIA.getRel(iCharCynthia).raiseExp(-50)
                    hide cynthia
                    return
        "\"You look exhausted, I don't want to disturb you.\"":
            show cynthia smile
            Cynthia "Thanks, whoever you may be."
            $ SIA.getRel(iCharCynthia).raiseExp(50)
            hide cynthia
            return

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